The Old: I've made my final update for my first cartoon. The new version includes better graphics, better sound, and a reason to watch it.
The new: My new cartoon is out: Cartoon about candy, let's sure hope it passes Under Judgment, and get's a high score!
themanthelegend
This version is by far superior to the original.
someplaceelse
That's such anice thing to say, and nice reveiws these days aren't as common.