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[Raw Latex]

OMG this is one of the greatest things I've seen in a while XDDDD
love the story line, general direction, and voice acting the best...
the animation was great, all though art-wise I think I prefer darker outlines... but that's just my preference.
The main reason I took off half a star is because I think it ended to soon... DX other than that keep up the good work!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

cheers.

[I Got No Money Redux]

So yah, your getting there.

I vaguly remember the last time you posted something like this I was all "Yah it needs work" but now I think you listened to me and other reviewers and I can see the actual improvments coming out of it. Like you actually drew the girl this time. I mean sure the artwork can still use a little work but that comes with practice (and not just cartoon drawing practice, like actual life drawing... which might sound strange, but it works). The animation has improved too, but like it still needs a little work. The tweening in particular, the frame by frame is all right. So yah it's all right! The thing you should focus on now is practice, really.

Yusuf responds:

Thanks, man! It's appreciated!

[Green riding hood]

Interesting spin

the animation was the best part, and the art fit in great. IDK what to say about improvement, this is pretty good already.

gusana responds:

Thanks! I will improve me animation skills anyway n_n

[-Patience-]

Unique style

I like this, it shows has a lot of style to it. Everything was clear (maybe a little less gradients next time), :P.

but I know turtleco's going to have to make something pretty amazing if he wants to top this. ;-*

PinkSkull responds:

hehehe thanks, well, I didn't want to use gradients at first but when I tried to color it I didn't like it much, so I used gradients.

[For Another Day]

Sweet!

I liked it! The animation was the best part: solid and fluid. The voices were a little hard to understand though, but that's all.

Good luck in the TOFA, luckily, your going to be able to participate in the next round due to the few competitors!

PinkSkull responds:

YAY! for few competitors!

[I Got No Money]

It wasn't too bad!

K first off I want to start by saying, telling people that you are 11 years old is not going to cut you any slack. Most people, like me, don't review based on age, and some people even review harsher.

Alright, the video was not bad. :) I liked some of the way you carried out the flash. Like the scene with the iphone where the view is directed toward the ground, is, in my opinion pure genius.

However, there are some things that really bugged me, like (and this has be said before, and I'm pretty sure your tiered of it) the art, witch isn't the worst, but would look better cleaned up, shaded, etc.

Another thing that bugged me was the fact that you didn't draw the girl in that one scene. Don't be afraid to draw women XD!

and I don't like Perry Gipp's music, but that's just my opinion, so you can keep him if you want.

But hey, your movies are practically overflowing with potential. So keep them coming. :)

Also, score doesn't matter people don't have an exact reason to why they gave you what score they gave you. What really counts is making the flash, getting feed back, and the rest.

So yah... sorry for the long review, but I really hope you read it! XD

Yusuf responds:

thanks :)

[You've Won...]

Neat

You seemed to have improved a lot! I see you took my advice on the voice acting (there's still some static, but with practice that can be fixed). Next target: art.
First of all, use a smoother brush. People tend to like that better I guess. Second of all, make the lines clean. Third and most important, learn anatomy of the human body. Even cartoonists have to learn that to become good. Look forward to seeing your later cartoons! :)

quitestupid responds:

thanks for the help!

[Run Down]

The old guy was funny,

But my personal opinion is that I think that some people rely to much on another animators style. The art here was defiantly a Cyanide and Happiness clone. Everything was pretty much alike. It kind of bothers me because I'm really picky when it comes to originality. My suggestion is that I think you should try making your characters in more of your own style. Anyway, that is my suggestion.

I totally laughed when I saw the old man's expression. Your sense of humor is something you should defiantly keep. Don't give up, and keep working at it! :)
Overall: 6/10 3/5

jakbo responds:

thanks man. and yea the point was to make it like cyanide and happiness. they are my favorite flash videos and i do my characters like that in honor of them. i could make my own characters but i just love the cyanide and happiness ones too much