your animation still sucks
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Scyther123
This is what I had planned to put in my review on that submission:
"We may treat it with respect, but that does not mean that we'll vote high. In fact, submitting your first flash is probably not the best idea.
There's a great lack of a real storyline, too... so the kid rings the doorbell, and everything gets dark, and the kid gets scared. The end. That's not really a story, and the "annoying kid trick-or-treating" thing has done so many times now. Come up with something original, something you made.
Also, you should familiarize yourself with animation and the Flash program itself before you try again. I'm sure you're capable of coming up with something good, but you need to put in the time and effort first."
Please do not take any of this to heart, by the way; what I said was meant to be constructive. Sorry if you take it any other way. =/
someplaceelse
Thanks for the reveiw, I know this does not mean You will vote high, I just want everyone to vote fair. This is not even my first flash, it is probaly about my 20th flash. My first flash sucked so bad, I trashed it. I deleted it. I do not really make flash that has a story either, I just make animations that represent a joke.
Also, like the fact that you reveiwed fairly. I totally agree to everything you say
(But that doesn't mean you won't see a better version of this flash again!)