I've improved my last blamed item, an early trick or treater, so now I'm going to see how it does this time. Thank you to everyone who reveiwed my last submission, it helped me alot.
(This next picture is a joke.)
"Life! Death! Life! Death!" - Patrick Star
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Hey, you did it! Good job. =)
Now, if you plan on submitting something else in the future, try putting more detail into the graphics and special effects. This may (and in most cases, will) take a lot of practicing and experimenting to see what works best, but this will make you much more efficient at Flash in the long run.
Also, try planning out an more thoroughly thought out storyline, using a lot more of your original thought than you did before The twist on this flash was pretty cool, but it's time to take it one step further. Besides, people tend to prefer originality.
Yah, I'll concider that.
Scyther123
I personally think your flash will do a lot better this time around. You've made huge improvements to it. It's already gone through more than 150 views at the time of this posting, so there's only one more checkpoint to pass. =)
<SYTHAR> YA I DDI UR FLAHS SUKS JUTS LEIK YEW ROFLORLOFLROFLOLOLLOLOL
^-- my joke in response to your joke. =P
someplaceelse
Thanks! You're the best.