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[Love can overcome all]

Hey! Pretty nice!

The animation was smooth especially for a stick figure one. The white background sort of added to the minimalism of it.

The things that I would improve on would be a) make the sticks bigger. and b) make the wiggle on the wall less wiggly.

But that's just me being picky. :P

Overall: nice job.

[<Backwards<]

Hey, good job.

even though it is backwards I can still understand what it going on.

To be able to pull that off is pure tallent, believe me.

Kreid responds:

Huzzah! It was a bit of a risk, but I didnt want to be boring and do the bog standard backwards day thing

[RE: Your brains]

XD I like it.

Defiantly a good one. The song is one of my favorites. The art is simple, but good (though I prefer the brush tool over the line tool, but whatever). The animation had a lot of tweens in it, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, especially for this one, because it has a satisfying look. Over all: 9/10 5/5 and a favorite. :)

[Come Back to Me]

Cute

It's pretty cute. It was very good overall in general. The things I would do to make it better would to clean up some of the graphics, and maybe work on some of the animation. But other than that it's good, and I like it.

[Legendary carrot]

Good for first time.

If this is your first time lip syncing, I must say you have done it pretty well. The things I would improve are: make the graphics better (by using a thinner brush, tracing a rougher outline first, and correct proportions. Even cartoons have correct proportions in them), more animation (Use a smother FBF, and don't be afraid to use tweens!), and a better use of backgrounds (for the first part, I couldn't tell where they were).

Anyways out of all this is the best of the bad so I'll give it: 5/10 2/5

[M3N Themesong]

:3_

Funny, very very funny. I like, watched it 3 times and I still laugh. Can't wait for the upcoming episodes.

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

Hehe

I like how he made the audience seem stupid. :P

The voice acting was great and the way you arranged the words was even better.

I like lazymuffin's appearance. I didn't even think of him when you were talking XD.

[Pee Soup]

Daily 5th, and 2 reviews

THis has daily 5th and 2 reviews. Wow, I miss the days where cartoons like these got but loads of reviews. Anyway, I thought it deserved another one. :P

So, the video was pretty funny itself, the drawings were hilarious, I guess the only thing that I would make different is to make the fact that the voice actors are not voice acting anymore. It took me a while to figure out.

DestructoBox responds:

Thanks for the review! It was tricky to emphasize the stopping because we both act in our normal voices. The record scratch was added to try and hammer in that we stopped, but yeah. I can see how that'd be a little awkward.

Thanks again!

[Birthday 19]

hahaha

As soon as I heard "rap song" I thought... uh oh.

Happy 19th birthday. :P

[An Unfortunate Girl:Lapse]

Nice

Good story line, the end left me wanting to watch part two. It jumped around a lot yet it was very easy to understand. The only thing I would suggest would to clean up the graphics, but even those are almost top notch top notch.

I say, if you would have made the colors a little duller, I would have thought this was the work of David Firth (or Frith... I forgot)

mmmmmm...

TheFabs responds:

Part 2 is going to have much cleaner, more thought out graphics. Along with a more realistic look for the characters (Smaller heads, better proportions and such)

I like the way the second part is coming out much better than this.