Well I have to say...
That was very unexpected. In a good way though. Nice work. The only thing that I would do to make it better is to use less gameplay/videos and bitmaps.
Well I have to say...
That was very unexpected. In a good way though. Nice work. The only thing that I would do to make it better is to use less gameplay/videos and bitmaps.
Pretty sweet.
Animation was consistent and fluid, and I like it. I lol'd at the end. It was hilarious.
almost perfect
Nice1, I liked it very much. The voice acting was great, except Nakoruru I think needs to speak up, because I had trouble hearing the voices of all the female characters. The story was awesomesauce, except I could tell there was going to be a "flying machine" involved even from the very beginning. Art was cool, I liked the rough brush style (although most people don't), your proportions were off, it seemed like all of the characters were on steroids, because all of their bodies were huge compared to their heads. :P Animation was perfect. I need to learn from you, lol.
So all in all everything was near-perfect, just work on the things I gave you, and it will be better. Looking forward to your next submission. ;)
Heh glad someone likes the brush, i just hate how it adjusts what you draw when you put smoothing on. Thanks for the review and tips, ill be sure to work on proportions.
...the crap?
I thought it was OK, but didn't have me laughing as much as the first one. :P
With the walrus as an exception. The walrus was awesome.
Nice1
I love the color, the catchy tune, and the story. The art was pretty cool, and the animations was good as well. I actually like this. :)
Did I jus see...
bear holding a shark? XD
Whatever I just saw, it was pretty random, so I'll give it a 5 out of 10...
Yep.
Like some of the ideas, voice acting was O~K may be, perhaps you should get someone else to do it lol. I really like the surreal dream, it's pretty cool. I'm also satisfied with the length: a nice short cartoon. Now here are it's week points; over dramatic lip-syncing, white background, bad audio quality, drawings, and, sorry, stolen jokes and ideas :P. Work on those, and you will become really good, perhaps may be front page one day... you certainly have capability. ;)
Also: experiments, do not submit unless something about is very, VERY, unforgivably, awesome about it. :P
that was some nice constructive critisism! :D
Nice
Nice story, OK graphics (wich means could-be inproved, may be cleaner), choppy animation (try upping your frame rate. :P), and great overall.
Makes me want to watch part two. :)
Lol
Lol, nice game, ROFL, LMAO, Ok, I'm done. I've kept my promise now HAVE I?
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