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[<Backwards<]

Hey, good job.

even though it is backwards I can still understand what it going on.

To be able to pull that off is pure tallent, believe me.

Kreid responds:

Huzzah! It was a bit of a risk, but I didnt want to be boring and do the bog standard backwards day thing

[Pee Soup]

Daily 5th, and 2 reviews

THis has daily 5th and 2 reviews. Wow, I miss the days where cartoons like these got but loads of reviews. Anyway, I thought it deserved another one. :P

So, the video was pretty funny itself, the drawings were hilarious, I guess the only thing that I would make different is to make the fact that the voice actors are not voice acting anymore. It took me a while to figure out.

DestructoBox responds:

Thanks for the review! It was tricky to emphasize the stopping because we both act in our normal voices. The record scratch was added to try and hammer in that we stopped, but yeah. I can see how that'd be a little awkward.

Thanks again!

[An Unfortunate Girl:Lapse]

Nice

Good story line, the end left me wanting to watch part two. It jumped around a lot yet it was very easy to understand. The only thing I would suggest would to clean up the graphics, but even those are almost top notch top notch.

I say, if you would have made the colors a little duller, I would have thought this was the work of David Firth (or Frith... I forgot)

mmmmmm...

TheFabs responds:

Part 2 is going to have much cleaner, more thought out graphics. Along with a more realistic look for the characters (Smaller heads, better proportions and such)

I like the way the second part is coming out much better than this.

[Our Dreams]

almost perfect

Nice1, I liked it very much. The voice acting was great, except Nakoruru I think needs to speak up, because I had trouble hearing the voices of all the female characters. The story was awesomesauce, except I could tell there was going to be a "flying machine" involved even from the very beginning. Art was cool, I liked the rough brush style (although most people don't), your proportions were off, it seemed like all of the characters were on steroids, because all of their bodies were huge compared to their heads. :P Animation was perfect. I need to learn from you, lol.

So all in all everything was near-perfect, just work on the things I gave you, and it will be better. Looking forward to your next submission. ;)

PIED3 responds:

Heh glad someone likes the brush, i just hate how it adjusts what you draw when you put smoothing on. Thanks for the review and tips, ill be sure to work on proportions.

[V for Chappelle: Food]

Did I jus see...

bear holding a shark? XD

Whatever I just saw, it was pretty random, so I'll give it a 5 out of 10...

Smiley-Bob responds:

It's A bear with sharks for hands. Or Bearshark for short.

thanks :D.

[Video Dream]

Yep.

Like some of the ideas, voice acting was O~K may be, perhaps you should get someone else to do it lol. I really like the surreal dream, it's pretty cool. I'm also satisfied with the length: a nice short cartoon. Now here are it's week points; over dramatic lip-syncing, white background, bad audio quality, drawings, and, sorry, stolen jokes and ideas :P. Work on those, and you will become really good, perhaps may be front page one day... you certainly have capability. ;)

Also: experiments, do not submit unless something about is very, VERY, unforgivably, awesome about it. :P

Rucofilms responds:

that was some nice constructive critisism! :D

[Tablet vs Pencil]

hehe

I was smiling in the end. Nice animation! Great job... this is probably the only stick figure animation I can watch with out not liking it, so I'll give you my opinion:

tablet. You get the same effect with less scanning. :P

martiescageda responds:

Well, I don't agree that you get the same, but I sure like the time I save without scanning.

I'm glad you liked it, it was my first stick animation as well as the first time I used pen and paper.

[Staying Home.]

I see

It's very artistic. I like the plot and how everything is abstract in shape. The way the photographs were used were unique and unlike anything I've seen. I like it. :)

Mechabloby responds:

thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[NG 2009]

Tarboy is in there.

I saw him first time I watched it... I think the submission that is truly missing is Replaying :the game:

Nice all in all.

poprock responds:

Replaying The Game came out as I was wrapping this up. That game is pretty damn hilarious though.

[The Halloween Short]

Nice

Backround and length is needed, but other than that great!

Can't wait for "The something" by the way! :3

ChannelInfinity responds:

....Nice 5 you got there..... oh and about The Something I've decided I'm not ready yet.
Anyway thanks for the review.