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[Captain Planet Strip Club]

Great!

Another triumphant return of Sexual-Lobster: I can tell you're getting better.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[Cooking (bocodamondo)]

Please. Stop trolling him.

Now The animation was OK, but I've got some points to settle here. STOP TROLLING BOBCODAMONDO BY COMPARING HIM TO THE VOICE ACTORS HE USED!!! I mean seriously, even though Eddsworld, Egoraprtor, ect. etc. may have a lot more expierience in flash than this artist does, that shouldn't make it not OK to start ripping out every bad thing you can find about the flash; while at the same time, comparing it to a someone who has much more experience, because that is just rude, and unfair. Now "why?" You ask, "how did this guy get the help of these voice actors. The answer is, they are all being nice to him. Just like YOU should, (or some other reason that I don't know about :3)

About the animation though, it was great, I think you should clean the graphics a little bit, and make it run a bit faster for that extra point. ;D

bocodamondo responds:

no there right on my voice
i have bad english & bad micro

but thanks anywhere

[Freedom of speech]

Awesome.

Outstanding job on your new cartoon, I think it's actually pretty good. Many of the jokes made me LOL, so your jokes are fine already. The only thing I had trouble with were graphics. Try making them a little less messy, bet good job overall!

Agentluke responds:

Thanks man.

[an odd day at the zoo]

No really it's good,

Better than I expected even. Unique story line and everytihing, Next time you can try adding sound effects and improving the fbf animation by using methods such as a higher frame rate. Maby you should try erasing stray lines from your graphics. Not all that bad, and definatly not deserving the score it has (as in the score is lower than it shouldd be.)

savage011 responds:

thanks dude

[I Got No iPhone!]

So,

Animation is actually good, all you need to improve on making the art less messy by erasing stray lines, and I don't think making the main character have a stick body and stick arms and legs doesn't look very appealing. The lip syncing was horrible. Try setting the music to "stream" in flash in the properties window then match up the sounds with the mouths by clicking and draging on the frames containing the music.

(psst- you seem to not know about the "other one" There is already a music video of the same song made by "sh0t-d0wn" I suggest you watch it)
3/5
6/10

mattt2008 responds:

o__o i dosnt know that i search the name"i got no iphone" and i dont found that:( if i knew that before then i wouldnt make the vid

[Wierd WTF movie]

It's OK...

For one, please don't use a white backround. Make backrounds on your own. For two, Please work on your lip syncing. Don't just make some empty black shape and call it a mouth. Try filling it in with something, add teeth or even toung when the mouth is open. For three, when you are doing Frame by Frame animation, please use the onion skinning If you haven't already, it will help you by showing the frame before the one your on. For five, I think you should use a tablet to draw. Your drawing already look good, plus you used the gradient tool to shade them, so that will probaly give you a head start. Those are my suggestions for your next release. If you release any more, you could probaly be very good at this. You definatly have the talent to. ;)

xelander responds:

Thanks for your awesome review!
I happen to not have money for a tablet.
But you atlast doing a good review, thanks.

[The Buffoon & Co. EP 1]

For one

your animation is not horrible. Don't be so hard on yourself! If you want to see terrible animation. Watch stick figure fight scenes. In general. This cartoon is actualy good... so keep it up!

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Thanks for the kind words. Take 'er easy

[Chaos Teaser]

If the trailer is good...

then more people will watch the movie when it comes out. That means the more votes and veiws it will get. That's the point of the trailer.

It's pretty good by the way, the only problem was that most of the graphics were stolen from sonic the hedgehog.

Accana responds:

lmfao.

Thank you for pointing out the obvious. I totally was not aware I was using sprites.

[Breck Dancing Stick]

I can say you've improved.

I'm sooooo glad you didn't continue animating stick figures because I personaly hate them.

For one, it was poorly animated, the music wasn't yours and you didn't give any credit. It was short, choppy, and unoriginal, but it's not the worst I've seen so you get one point.

LazyMuffin responds:

I was 12 you dick

[b from da hood]

NO.

Quality: Default, the built in quality is already attatched to the B, and the B isn't even in the center, it is slightly off to the left a bit. The white background gives it an extra touch to the messyness, therefore it has very low quality.
0/0
Sound: No sound just the B, and that's what makes this boring. No music to listen to, no soundloops to turn the volume down to. Nothing. Just the red B right on the canvas, the color of red is boring also.
0/0
Artwork: None of thee artwork is yourds a white backround from the developers of flash, and the letter B from whoever designed the Times roman new font. Bad use of them also, no diffrent than what many people have done before you.
0/0
Originality: This is so overused. People use the letter B many times in their daily conversaition, Because I beleive I have used the second letter of the alphabet imbeded in the sentence 5 times, and the clock crew has used B already.
0/0

This flash has no animation at all.
-10\10
-15\5

ZJ responds:

It's a clock day flash you dumb fuck.